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you mentioned just now that pigeons have been on your mind with so many of them about, & it's funny, but that's the feeling I got from this. there's almost no imagery & few metaphors prior to it, but with all the talk of still being half in a dream,of words, of the brain, the pigeon seems too random to be random. :) KS On 10/05/07, Tina Bass <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > Kasper, thank you very much. > Does this mean that you liked the pigeons? > > Cheers > > Tina > > > > -------------------------------------------------------------- > [log in to unmask] > http://www.fatmandancing.co.uk > http://www.myspace.com/fat_man_dancing > > > > > > > > >From: kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]> > >Reply-To: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics" <[log in to unmask]> > >To: [log in to unmask] > >Subject: Re: SNAP Bass > >Date: Thu, 10 May 2007 10:51:13 +0300 > > > >wow. > >unbelievable rhythm, great pinpoint imagery > > > >KS > > > >On 09/05/07, Tina Bass <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > >>ripe from dreaming > >>asks: why does the wind? > >> > >>he is aloud > >>unused to static > >>listening moves to words > >> > >>stretching the true > >>mist rusting brain > >>facts – not sated – swollen like pigeons > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >>-------------------------------------------------------------- > >>[log in to unmask] > >>http://www.fatmandancing.co.uk > >>http://www.myspace.com/fat_man_dancing > >> >