Can we expect this third iteration to be it, for the moment, Roger? I was about to say something about the first one, as the others appeared.... Which is to say I don't quite get all of it, but I did follow along, enjoying the turns, the twists, the very short line breaks (cf Kasper on that: it is something that does mean to me, rhythm, movement). And the addition of >> undertow >> monochrome >> disjoint moves it further, along, out.... Useful to the ppem , in other words... Doug On 26-Apr-07, at 8:10 AM, Roger Day wrote: > On 4/26/07, Roger Day <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >> On 4/26/07, Roger Day <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >> > this morning's morning >> > certain certain >> > warrior >> > lithium containment vice >> > vice Douglas Barbour 11655 - 72 Avenue NW Edmonton Ab T6G 0B9 (780) 436 3320 http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ Latest book: Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy) http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664 Light weighs light, to the hand, to the eye. Feel it in two places. Robert Creeley