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Gavin you are a brave man to post here -I like this poem much better free-er -do you belong to a local group that is a good arena to get feedback Best wishes Patrick -----Original Message----- From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Gavin Fagan Sent: 26 March 2007 05:27 To: [log in to unmask] Subject: Loneliest Walk Loneliest Walk Silently I sit looking out to sea Watching the waves Foaming up Breaking all around Remembering those Summer nights Bare foot across the sand The tide lapping at our feet Arm in arm Quietly we'd sit As the sun Slowly sank in the distance Now the clouds are dark Tide no longer Lapping at our feet Waves angerly lashing At the rocks all around Unhurriedly I stand Recalling the dark night You left me Step be step I walk Bit by bit I feel the waves As they climb Until I have only A picture of you In my mind! Written by Gavin WM Fagan 2007 Would like feed back on my poem, thanks. [log in to unmask] Send instant messages to your online friends http://au.messenger.yahoo.com