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I really like the images but I'm not sure about the repetition of "how" to start each new image - it didn't flow for me. Not sure what to suggest but maybe you can just eliminate them and it will work... Good stuff. H -----Original Message----- From: Caleb Cluff [mailto:[log in to unmask]] Sent: 31 January 2007 23:19 To: [log in to unmask] Subject: Late snap - apologies... Am I so graceless, unable to see at the first cautious whisper of rain, how the gum offers slight green gossip, how the dung beetle, anthracite teardrop, goes about his task without myth, how your eternal face fell as we left the room. Caleb Cluff Majorca 31/1/07 ============================================================================ == The information contained in this email and any attachment is confidential and may contain legally privileged or copyright material. It is intended only for the use of the addressee(s). If you are not the intended recipient of this email, you are not permitted to disseminate, distribute or copy this email or any attachments. If you have received this message in error, please notify the sender immediately and delete this email from your system. The ABC does not represent or warrant that this transmission is secure or virus free. Before opening any attachment you should check for viruses. The ABC's liability is limited to resupplying any email and attachments ============================================================================ ==