Douglas It seemed to want to go on longer -'all fall down' did not sit (for me!!) so well wouldn't offal more sort of slop glop ?? P -----Original Message----- From: Poetryetc provides a venue for a dialogue relating to poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Douglas Barbour Sent: 28 February 2007 16:41 To: [log in to unmask] Subject: snap: "dilution of memory" ghosts it seems or just grave corpses bones of an army gone to rust and sand ' troops and kit ... pretty frayed at the edges' how edgy then and now inturned to ward off memory pay no attention crumpled hills of metal left for remembrance flowers of offal 'all fall down' Wednesday February 28 2007 Douglas Barbour 11655 - 72 Avenue NW Edmonton Ab T6G 0B9 (780) 436 3320 http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ Latest book: Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy) http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664 There was no sign of survivors, and the poetry reading went on. Tony Perniciaro