I totally agree with Kasper.
Only the final sentence has me a bit puzzled:
> > ...On the surface
> > the speed of sound at sea levels us.
I have trouble connecting this with the rest. (That connection
thing again!)
Janet
> jesus. this is very, very good. I've come to expect poetry of a very
> high quality from you Caleb, & you haven't let me down.
> I may come back to interpret this.
>
> KS
>
> On 09/02/07, Caleb Cluff <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > Homecoming
> >
> >
> > My father is a room of blue
> > of giant blue and anger
...
> > that leave no bruises. On the surface
> > the speed of sound at sea levels us.
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The choice is between nonviolence and nonexistence.
Martin Luther King Jr.
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