paw-awn? this is too disjointed for me, though there's good structure/imagery peeking KS On 13/12/06, Tina Bass <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > > Halfway House > > > > you want paw-awn? she asks > > scattering her slim supplies > > > > face an enviable blank > > body frozen for a practised long-time > > > > she waits for him to choose > > three for juss ten powns > > > > > > for one moment catches both my eyes > > > > > > > > -------------------------------------------------------------- > [log in to unmask] > http://www.myspace.com/fat_man_dancing >