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I saw Alison do it with Nikephoros Vrettakos/ Jon Corelis. It's a good exercise and sometimes results in dual insights into the writing. But yours was the spike Sharon. And Kasper - I'm going with your suggestion. It's much better. Cal -----Original Message----- From: Poetryetc provides a venue for a dialogue relating to poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of sharon brogan Sent: Thursday, 7 September 2006 7:50 AM To: [log in to unmask] Subject: Re: Snap re Snap 30 August 02006 I love this -- I would have, even if it weren't a response to mine. & I love how it reflects -- like a mirror -- what this exercise is about -- same day, different season... Thank you. On 9/4/06, Caleb Cluff <[log in to unmask]> wrote: It's not yet September > but Spring gives the lip > to Summer's brute maw. Restless > the trees. > > -----Original Message----- > > poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of sharon brogan > > > It's not yet September > but the morning light > pales winter-dim. Forests > burn; our air thickens > with ashes and smoke. > -- ~ SB =^..^= http://www.sbpoet.com ============================================================================== The information contained in this email and any attachment is confidential and may contain legally privileged or copyright material. It is intended only for the use of the addressee(s). If you are not the intended recipient of this email, you are not permitted to disseminate, distribute or copy this email or any attachments. If you have received this message in error, please notify the sender immediately and delete this email from your system. The ABC does not represent or warrant that this transmission is secure or virus free. Before opening any attachment you should check for viruses. The ABC's liability is limited to resupplying any email and attachments ==============================================================================