This has a lot of potential!
> unspoken wet mornings
and
> a ceremony that will tie her
> forever to the earth
Both too good to waste!
If it were my snap I might think about starting with
the unspoken wet mornings... the stuff before that
is kind of vague.
Janet
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Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
Poems at Proximity:
http://www.arach.net.au/~huxtable/janet/proximity.html
"As long as space remains,
as long as sentient beings remain,
until then, may I too remain
and dispel the miseries of the world."
Shantideva
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