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I usually like yours Stephen, but this doesn't really do it for me. I can't get enough of a connection between the bits (which is what it takes for me to get into this kind of poetry). Janet > Tenderly #13 or The Gertrude Improvs: > > Yugoslavia is not up nor > > An arrangement called "saucers" (etc) ------------------------------------------------------ Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]> Poems at Proximity: http://www.arach.net.au/~huxtable/janet/proximity.html ------------------------------------------------------