And you 'allude' to something rather than 'elude'. Better still, "I have not provided the case name for obvious data protection reasons." Best wishes Andrew --On 14 November 2006 10:57 +0000 Simon Howarth <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > Wording could be improved to make it scan better, but the overall content > is OK. I think requesting this confirmation is a wise move, if the > request is in any way questioned. > > My only other comment is pedantic, and is to state that "datum is", but > "data are". > > Simon. > > > > -----Original Message----- > From: This list is for those interested in Data Protection issues > [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Nick Landau > Sent: 13 November 2006 16:23 > To: [log in to unmask] > Subject: Re: [data-protection] Incorrect use of the DPA 29(3) > > I don't know about the DPA, but the Clear English campaign might also be > consulted (the letter-writer not you). > > Nick Landau > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Paul Dodgson" <[log in to unmask]> > To: <[log in to unmask]> > Sent: Monday, November 13, 2006 4:01 PM > Subject: [data-protection] Incorrect use of the DPA 29(3) > > > Hi all, > > I detail below a letter which asks the recipient to state the powers > they are exercising when making requests for information. > > I am looking for it to be shot down, or otherwise wounded! It actually > relates, in part, to a very poor request from a housing benefit > inspector who made application using the wrong sections of the relevant > Act, and in any case was not certified! > > Any views very much appreciated > > Paul > > Dear XXX, > > I have from you a request for information (your ref xxxx). I have not > eluded to the case name for obvious data protection reasons. > > The request is made under S29 (3) DPA 98. > > Section 29(3) provides that personal data is exempt from non-disclosure > provisions if the disclosure is for purposes detailed in Section 29 (1). > In this case I consider that to relate to Section 29 (1) a,b or c. > [adjusted to suit] > > This is fine. What is not is the statutory powers you wish to rely on > obliging us to release that information no longer protected from > non-disclosure by virtue of that described above. > > I suggest you look at your letters in this regard. Clearly if any such > investigation [specific to the issues I am dealing with, but could be > amended to suit] ended in court and it came to the knowledge of the > court that inappropriate powers were cited, this could have a negative > impact insofar as your case is concerned. > > I have an obligation to ensure that personal data is protected, subject > to the exemptions available in the Act and any enabling powers requiring > that such data be released consequent upon Section 29 (1) DPA 98. I > trust you understand that I cannot approve release of information on the > basis of what I have received thus far. > > I strongly advise that you take advice from your Data Protection > Officer. > > > Yours etc > > _______________________________________________________________________ > Leicestershire County Council - rated a 'four-star' council by the Audit > Commission > _______________________________________________________________________ > > > This e-mail and any files transmitted with it are confidential. If you > are not the intended recipient, any reading, printing, storage, > disclosure, copying or any other action taken in respect of this e-mail > is prohibited and may be unlawful. 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