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Those hay(na)ku are interesting, Jill, as they allow for whatever
syllables while insisting on the steps of words down the line. Would
you go further for another couple of lines ever?
I liked them, as well as your renga.
A certain enforced discipline for practice?
Doug
Douglas Barbour
Department of English
University of Alberta
Edmonton Alberta T6G 2E5 Canada
(780) 436 3320
http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/dbhome.htm
I don’t need to
hold back here
in the union
of forms
Charles Olson