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Yes, I enjoyed the tale too. You found the right word for it, Stephen; 
thanks Hal.

Doug
On 19-Dec-05, at 8:24 AM, Stephen Vincent wrote:

> Sweet parable, Hal. It will probably 'bother' me all day in a good way.
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>> Indifferent Trains
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>> I was reading Chekhov’s “Three Sisters” again
>> for the last time when I lost the timetable my travel
>> agent had slipped into the envelope holding my ticket.
>> Someone said I should ask the conductor to give
>> me a new one. I said, “Hell, who really cares where
>> we’re going or when we’ll get there?” The train itself
>> certainly didn’t care who I was or where I was going.
>> It just kept up its little mantra: Ticket-taker, ticket-taker,
>> ticket-taker, ticket-taker, ticket-taker . . . well, you get
>> my meaning, don’tcha, buddy? If pressed to say so,
>> I’d say that the passengers in this car are funny,
>> sensual, and poignant. The guy in front of me goes
>> so far as to amuse himself by, every ten or fifteen
>> minutes, plucking a single strand of hair from the back
>> of the head of the woman in front of him, the one who’s
>> been sleeping ever since we pulled out of the station
>> in Detroit. Still, a full bladder will often make my visit
>> to the lavatory at the rear of the car worthwhile and
>> rewarding. Wherever we’re going we must be running
>> along the terminator now–there’s sunshine to the right
>> and darkness, with looming thunderheads, off to the
>> left. Excitement is pitched at a level of intensity that seems
>> more like ecstasy than potty-mouthed travel. The miles
>> are repetitive, but never really mawkish. The conductor
>> is terrific in his well-pressed uniform, stopping to pull
>> out of his watch pocket a lidded, round watch just like the one
>> my grandfather left to my father and my father passed on
>> to me–superbly crafted. Tickety-tock, tickety-tock,
>> tickety-tock. The train, while never for a moment losing
>> its momentum, integrates us into landscape after landscape.
>> Around the time that dawn breaks on the prairie, some of my
>> fellow passengers wake up and begin to converse–you know,
>> mundane stuff with bits of confusion and banality mixed in.
>> A mother with two kids cuddled up on the seat next to her
>> says to one, “Don’t be a chatterbox, chatterbox, chatterbox.”
>> Across the aisle, two gentlemen in publishing are having
>> a little talk about how most trade house editors get their MSS
>> from agents now, and how, with the “whole anthrax thing”
>> folks are much less inclined to be reading unsolicited work.
>> I make a note of that, and wait to be called for breakfast.
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>> --Halvard Johnson
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