the stumble effect works well here Roger, so found the pile-up very effective. On 17-Nov-05, at 2:31 PM, Roger Day wrote: > stumble legs into november > blue sweets in a green jar > hide and seek behind a glass door > safeties off in nasty weather > the wrong tea bag, toast sweat > targets squared, sequencing PAVE > bread crumbs on the bread board > mercy of fuel-air weapons for sleeping farmers > vertices glow in untethered fury > a hard mind > whispers of rotten wood in load-bearing stanchions > lodgements of grey dust in scoured flesh > rhizomatic networks grip a body impolitic > pale emphasis > twist uplift of leaves > a magician opens her cave > glisten slyly in shadows, > > -- > http://www.badstep.net/ > http://www.cb1poetry.org.uk/ > > Douglas Barbour 11655 - 72 Avenue NW Edmonton Ab T6G 0B9 (780) 436 3320 Each leaf a runnel the roofs now skiffs in green I’ve never done anything but begin. Lisa Robertson