thanks Martin. The 'waves' stuck in my head. Cheers, Jill On Thursday, January 20, 2005, at 03:53 AM, MJ Walker wrote: > I too find this lovely & very suggestive - for instance "street-torn > waves" following a hiatus after "careless radio". > mj > > Jill Jones wrote: > >> after the weight >> of eleven dreams >> there's the dog shadow >> >> in morning columns >> noise is booming >> careless radio >> >> street-torn waves >> writing that lifts words >> busy empty pages >> >> remember >> the tunnel >> night has made >> >> >> >> Jill Jones >> Marrickville 19 January 2004 >> >> >> _______________________________________________________ >> Jill Jones >> >> web site: http://homepages.ihug.com.au/~jpjones >> blog: http://rubystreet.blogspot.com/ >> >> Latest books: >> Struggle and radiance: ten commentaries (Wild Honey Press) >> http://www.wildhoneypress.com >> >> Screens Jets Heaven. Available now from Salt Publishing >> http://www.saltpublishing.com >> > > _______________________________________________________ Jill Jones web site: http://homepages.ihug.com.au/~jpjones blog: http://rubystreet.blogspot.com/ Latest books: Struggle and radiance: ten commentaries (Wild Honey Press) http://www.wildhoneypress.com Screens Jets Heaven. Available now from Salt Publishing http://www.saltpublishing.com