I'm thinking about a cd collaboration, it's worth investigating. - Deborah ----Thanks, Doug and Deborah. Relating to what I just mentioned in a post to Arni, I used the piece in a reading last night, and I 'semi-sang' the final phrase/sentence: 'Nothing more to be said'. I'm mentioning that because I'm getting intrigued by the relationship between the poetic and the sung, it seems there's a kind of half-way house which poetry can inhabit. Best Dave David Bircumshaw Leicester, England Home Page A Chide's Alphabet Painting Without Numbers http://homepage.ntlworld.com/david.bircumshaw/index.htm ----- Original Message ----- From: "Deborah Russell" <[log in to unmask]> To: <[log in to unmask]> Sent: Thursday, April 17, 2003 7:21 PM Subject: Re: A dibble for Deborah Very nice, similar styles. I like them both. - Deborah Nice one, Dave. I like the short line, of course. > > >NO TITLE INDEED > >When the four-week moon of your madness >Curved on the blank pane of your head >Obscurities thronged with obscurities >In a dance from the living to the dead. >You crumbled like cottony, white bread. > No use, >I had to go. Nothing more to be said. It reminds me, sort of, of a poem I included on a question about 'love poetry' for my first year students in a poetry reading course, by a Canadian poet, who has not published for years, alas: I have been thinking a great deal about my bike that will be stolen. I don't like things whose inevitability works against me. Why have you driven through my heart? Make that what. by Artie Gold As you might guess, I really like this one... Doug Douglas Barbour Department of English University of Alberta Edmonton Alberta Canada T6G 2E5 (h) [780] 436 3320 (b) [780] 492 0521 http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/dbhome.htm he said the President said he would not kill anyone anymore and the way he would not kill would be to let the killers kill and then he would not be a killer Eli Mandel (circa 1970) Deborah Elizabeth Russell, Artist/Poet Post Poems | Inside | Cityslide Shadow Poetry | Parallels Words For The Wind _________________________________________________________________ Protect your PC - get McAfee.com VirusScan Online http://clinic.mcafee.com/clinic/ibuy/campaign.asp?cid=3963 Deborah Elizabeth Russell, Artist/Poet Post Poems | Inside | Cityslide Shadow Poetry | Parallels Words For The Wind _________________________________________________________________ Help STOP SPAM with the new MSN 8 and get 2 months FREE* http://join.msn.com/?page=features/junkmail