> language that has as Rich says, ‘a masculine persuasive force.’
 
 
Actually, Helen, it's as John Donne says, though I can see the reason for Adrienne Rich employing the quote.
 
 
david
 
 
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From: [log in to unmask]>Helen Hagemann
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Sent: Sunday, February 04, 2001 7:30 AM
Subject: I am woman, hear my voice...

The female voice

The female voice is arbitrary. It has an opaque meaning.  It functions as a concept. In its form it is similar to other concepts previously raised by poets, such as Charles Olson’s Projective Verse, where the reader is meant to to feel the kinetic energy; to be ‘propelled by the language of the poem to follow that track of energy down the page; to experience the process by which the poet’s energy propelled him there in the first place.’

For many women the stresses of writing poetry in their true, female voice has led to the pressures of imposed silence. Publication still exists in patriarchy and the demands of patriarchy expect the quality of work to be like their male counterparts. They expect universality in the material.

Therefore, establishing the female voice is about undermining patriarchy.

A woman goes to poetry diminished by decade upon decade of patriarchal dominance.  She avoids writing in her own language, avoids much of her victimization, suppressed anger, love, desire, demands of children, chores, errands, fatigue, loss of contact with her own being, redolent experience of place/landscape/world (eg. P.K. Page’s poem Planet Earth) rape, incest, domestic violence and passivism. Not all female poets, however, have this self-limitation. A sustained energy, going in fear of rejection and a fire in the belly, usually transcends passivity.

But, most female poets hold back, and in order for acceptance (publication) write in the traditional way or along with the status quo. The female poet loses herself within the confines of language that has as Rich says, ‘a masculine persuasive force.’

Adrienne Rich says in ‘When we dead Awaken’ – ‘to be a female human being trying to fulfill traditional functions in a traditional way is in direct conflict with the subversive function of the imagination.  She goes on to say that ‘by traditional she means conservative...  Women are often haunted by their womanly, energetic imagination... The choices are to rebel and resist but usually the VOICE obeys. It is ruled by the weight of an entirely dominant male society.’

Art will always be subject to the confines and boundaries of an ambitious, dominant power. Therefore, poetry is political. Female poets already occupying a confident space on the bookshelves, with editors and in their publishing house with several collections to their name can rest there.  They have choices, but there is no need for struggle, no need for change, no need for activism!

The female voice is change, it is persistence, it is anger, it is a new way of speaking, it is expression, it is experience. It is a perception of what a woman knows, feels, needs, wants, touches. It is something we all know and many recognise.

 My poem Let’s Belly Roll has been rejected by Meanjin, The Southern Review, Island, and Siglo. It is now published in an anthology called ,‘An Endless Afternoon.’ – an anthology on birth and mothering - produced for women, by women.

For Alison!

Let's belly roll

                             Echidna - Tachyglossus Aculeatus

 

prickly to begin with
and when approached
you belly roll
shoulder in a ball of silence
it's the same for me
except I rocked years
under the doona
perhaps that's our safety leaf                                                                                                                                  when we're close to despots

you hatch a single egg                                                                                                                                                   a tongue licks your breast          &! nbsp;                                                                                                                                  in childbirth I curled screaming                             &nb! sp;                                                                                                 with eyelids closed                                                                 !                                                                                   even worse breast feeding                                                                               &nb! sp;                                                        was messy painful, brief

here we differ greatly
only in looks
my body hair is minimal
you have too much belly fur
I’m buried in paper leaves
your snout probes soil
my enemies live in tunnels
you eat them for lunch                                                                                                                                           could we swap?

human forms have ways                                                                                                                                               of tearing forests to shreds              !                                                                                                                           it's like paring flesh                                        !                                                                                                             from ants nests                                                       &! nbsp;                                                                                                   and insect wings                                                               &! nbsp;                                                                                           do you still live in a rock retreat?

if I look hard I might find you
buried in soft sand                                                                                                                                             somewhere, afraid of me

Helen Hagemann



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