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Frank

I'd agree with Nicholas: less is more here, & this is a poem best left
without the addition, that tries, perhaps too hard, to wave a little flag
for closure's sake...

Doug

Douglas Barbour
Department of English
University of Alberta
Edmonton Alberta Canada T6G 2E5
(h) [780] 436 3320      (b) [780] 492 0521
http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/dbhome.htm

                We speak
        and as we stop we forget
        even to be alone is to repeat.
        (A silence's potential is to be infinitely printable.)

                        Clark Coolidge