Ah, Hugo Williams. I read a poem of his recently the gist of which is, male
poet looks lustfully at stranger woman sitting in rail carriage. This
occupies the first "fit", to use that word loosely. She goes to toilet and
poet has sudden image of her peeing all over his face. (I think the poet
imagines this taking place in her mind, rather than just in his, can't
remember.)
OK, you haven't read the poem. But taking the plot idea alone, is that an
open or closed form?
Doug
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