Hi Bill,
These are great fun, but also lovely in the way they merge the human
and nonhuman world as sources of creating. I especially liked the way
one could take 'pardon me / eucalypts undressing' in a couple of ways.
J
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pardon me
eucalypts undressing
in the clearing
a ladybug
crawls down my pen
into my haiku
a mosquito lands
on the lawn mower
buzz cousins
bw
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