Great, Patrick. And I love hearing what you say, as well, Jill, about this.
On Wed, Sep 13, 2023 at 5:36 AM Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
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> Ah, Jill, I had forgotten that you were one of Andrew’s collaborators - or
> he yours. I remember reading one and being astonished by the discipline
> required.
>
> Good luck on cat duties, Patrick. Melbourne looks like being unseasonably
> warm for your wife.
>
> Bill
>
> On Wed, 13 Sep 2023 at 9:30 pm, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> > I think you've made up a new form, Patrick, Renku, and renga, is/are
> > the linked Japanese forms. I remember doing them with our dear friend,
> > Andrew. But why not have a sparkling senku!
> >
> > ___________________________________________
> > Jill Jones
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> > I acknowledge the Kaurna people, traditional custodians and songmakers
> > of the land on which I live. Sovereignty was never ceded.
> >
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics"
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> > Sent:Wed, 13 Sep 2023 10:00:28 +0100
> > Subject:pat snap 1066
> >
> > EDIT
> >
> > he decided
> > to make his
> > rather unwieldy
> > one thousand
> > line Senku poem
> > a bit snappier
> > and
> > quickly
> > skilfully
> > cut it up
> > into over
> > Three hundred
> > short sparkling
> > Haiku
> >
> > pmcmanus
> > t060
> >
> > senku -Japanese 1,000 line renga poem
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