I’m guessing you don’t have a dog, Bill. You certainly get across teh hugeness of it all perhaps with a few redundancies, but it gives us a memory check (cheque) for sure.
Doug
> On Nov 17, 2020, at 1:57 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> We look at the world once, in childhood
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> The rest is memory
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> – Louise Gluck
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> Primary school seemed so HUGE then. How can you be sure anything is EVER
> its real size?
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> – David Mitchell
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>
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> Under attack -
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> get away get away
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> A barking
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> black and white dog
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> bursts forward open-mouthed
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> front paws ploughing at the ground
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> Struggle to clamber up the step
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> – the only available refuge
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> so high up
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> Dim possibility
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> of being bitten
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> but more
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> just want away
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> from abrupt
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> angry-sounding
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> quick-firing loudness
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>
>
> See the scene now
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> in a memory frame
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> Pan back -
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> there, the unpaved yard
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> the chooks somewhere near
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> the massive - concrete? - step
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> – the way up to the back door
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> from the back yard
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> Too short to reach
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> the door knob
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> even if standing up were possible
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>
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> At the time no frame
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> just present tense –
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> bailed up by the bark
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>
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> What size that step?
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> A vast plateau?
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> Its up-ness all that mattered
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> Stuff just happens
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> to you and around you
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> when you are small
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> The dog episode
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> just retrievable enough
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> to form a slim anecdote
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> and a lifetime's phobia
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> bw
>
Douglas Barbour
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