Thanks Barry, I do think of the 5-7-5, but the rest is kinda intuitive. I appreciate your boundless analytics.
Doug
> On Nov 25, 2020, at 6:59 PM, Barry Alpert <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> Doug, Distinct music via i, ou, o, u, nd, d. Intriguing placement of comma within third line distinguishing visually in that line itself between clouds and sun. Classic 5-7-5 haiku. Flawless. Barry
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> On Wed, 25 Nov 2020 11:59:47 -0700, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> sun hides behind clouds
>> light still finds its way around
>> dark , muted glory
>>
Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
Listen. If (UofAPress):
There was the usual amount of corruption, intimidation,
and rioting.
Sir Charles Petrie
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