Yes 3 lines works best ..,
Andrew
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> On 5 Mar 2020, at 7:36 pm, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> Subject: Re: snap: another 3 word (or 4?)
> Date: Thu, 5 Mar 2020 09:21:26 +0000
> From: Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>
> Reply-To: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics <[log in to unmask]>
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> but not so pretty layout -
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> screen ed-it changed
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>> On 04/03/2020 22:02, Bill Wootton wrote:
>> Clever, Doug. A further line reduction might look like
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>> screen ed
>> it changed
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>> Bill
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>>> On Thu, 5 Mar 2020 at 3:33 am, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>>> for Barry Alpert
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>>> ed it
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