The whole poem is that 'impetuous trespass’, Sheila, & I love how it moves, through those verbs you make do.
So I agree with Millicent & the others on how it moves (us).
Doug
> On Sep 3, 2019, at 11:01 PM, Millicent Borges Accardi <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> I love this poem, as it progressed from being rooted and grounded to flight, almost a life journey.
> These phrases in particular:
> "We halfway occupy these bodies choiced to transcend"
>
> and
> "Light treetops its way toward whiter light" !!!!
>
>
> And that ending? Filled me with new life and astonishment.
> Millicent
>
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> @TopangaHippie on TwitterÁgua mole em pedra dura tanto dá até que fura
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
> To: POETRYETC <[log in to unmask]>
> Sent: Tue, Sep 3, 2019 9:44 pm
> Subject: snap
>
> You are the magnolia and I dream impetuous trespass
> where few roads converge mid woods.
>
> We halfway occupy these bodies choiced to transcend
> destinations fragrant as wax blossoms.
>
> Light treetops its way toward whiter light
> that noons ascension via sleek firm wings.
>
> Sheila E. Murphy
>
Douglas Barbour
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