Thanks heaps, Bill. I appreciate your referencing the visual and verb work!
Sheila
On Tue, Sep 3, 2019, 10:45 PM Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Like Millicent, I admire your verb coinages, Sheila, like
>
> Light treetops its way toward whiter light.
>
> Very visual.
>
> Bikl
>
> On Wed, 4 Sep 2019 at 3:10 pm, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
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> > Millicent, your reading means the world. I deeply appreciate your feeling
> > what I was seeking to reach here. Thank you! Sheila
> >
> > On Tue, Sep 3, 2019 at 10:01 PM Millicent Borges Accardi <
> > [log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> > > I love this poem, as it progressed from being rooted and grounded to
> > > flight, almost a life journey.
> > > These phrases in particular:
> > > "We halfway occupy these bodies choiced to transcend"
> > >
> > > and
> > > "Light treetops its way toward whiter light" !!!!
> > >
> > >
> > > And that ending? Filled me with new life and astonishment.
> > > Millicent
> > >
> > > Poetry Collection: Only More So @ Amazon
> > > http://www.MillicentBorgesAccardi.com
> > > @TopangaHippie on TwitterÁgua mole em pedra dura tanto dá até que fura
> > >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
> > > To: POETRYETC <[log in to unmask]>
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> > > You are the magnolia and I dream impetuous trespass
> > > where few roads converge mid woods.
> > >
> > > We halfway occupy these bodies choiced to transcend
> > > destinations fragrant as wax blossoms.
> > >
> > > Light treetops its way toward whiter light
> > > that noons ascension via sleek firm wings.
> > >
> > > Sheila E. Murphy
> > >
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