So wonderful to hear you say this, Doug. I appreciate your kind
appreciation of this piece. Sheila
On Wed, Sep 4, 2019 at 9:32 AM Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> The whole poem is that 'impetuous trespass’, Sheila, & I love how it
> moves, through those verbs you make do.
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> So I agree with Millicent & the others on how it moves (us).
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> Doug
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> > On Sep 3, 2019, at 11:01 PM, Millicent Borges Accardi <
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> > I love this poem, as it progressed from being rooted and grounded to
> flight, almost a life journey.
> > These phrases in particular:
> > "We halfway occupy these bodies choiced to transcend"
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> > "Light treetops its way toward whiter light" !!!!
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> > And that ending? Filled me with new life and astonishment.
> > Millicent
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> > Poetry Collection: Only More So @ Amazon
> > http://www.MillicentBorgesAccardi.com
> > @TopangaHippie on TwitterÁgua mole em pedra dura tanto dá até que fura
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
> > To: POETRYETC <[log in to unmask]>
> > Sent: Tue, Sep 3, 2019 9:44 pm
> > Subject: snap
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> > You are the magnolia and I dream impetuous trespass
> > where few roads converge mid woods.
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> > We halfway occupy these bodies choiced to transcend
> > destinations fragrant as wax blossoms.
> >
> > Light treetops its way toward whiter light
> > that noons ascension via sleek firm wings.
> >
> > Sheila E. Murphy
> >
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> Douglas Barbour
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> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations
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