really love that first one, Bill. These are nice! Sheila
On Wed, Aug 28, 2019 at 9:18 AM Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
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> I like them both, Bill, but feel the first keeps its mystery while th 2nd
> slides a bit into didactic in the final lineā¦
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> Doug
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> > On Aug 27, 2019, at 8:28 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
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> > What if waves,
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> > seeing the shore,
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> > Foaming lines erupt
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> > from billowing depths
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> > - fresh ideas
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> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations
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