Bill,
This is an intriguing piece, and it goes to a fundamental reality and
pattern many engage in quite unconsciously without recognizing what is
going on.
Permit me to offer an alternative approach using your own lines and see how
you think of this. You'll note that what I'm after is no explanation, just
showing and allowing what you show to be powerful. Not sure about the
ending.
Emerging from pockets
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> keys advance on locks
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> Locks make walls
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> of doors and windows
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> Firm male metal slides
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> into the receptive latch
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> fills the aperture
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> penetrates the wall
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> with a permissive click
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> enabling wider openings
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> [ENDING NOT SURE ABOUT]
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> bw
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