Thanks Doug -will look but think I need it cheers P using cliches is
like eating forbidden fruit
On 23/01/2019 16:26, Douglas Barbour wrote:
> Yes, best avoided in such men. Do you need the second ‘that’?
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> Doug
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>> On Jan 23, 2019, at 4:09 AM, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> cheers Bill I liked the idea of using cliches in a poem :)
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>> On 23/01/2019 10:21, Bill Wootton wrote:
>>> Well, Patrick, no poem about poems from you this week. Cliches, as your
>>> female protagonist suggests, always best avoided.
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>>> Bill
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>>> On Wed, 23 Jan 2019 at 8:24 pm, Patrick McManus <
>>> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>>>> *POET*
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>>>> she decided that
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>>>> senses reeling
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>>>> between a rock
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>>>> and a hard place
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>>>> stuff that dreams
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>>>> were made of
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>>>> young and foolish
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>>>> but tough as nails
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>>>> still waters running deep
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>>>> to err is human
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>>>> that her boyfriend
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>>>> was a total cliché
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>>>> and had to go
>>>>
>>>> /pmcmanus/
>>>>
>>>> /s419/
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