Oh, I see what Barry’s on about there, Bill, & for greater ambiguity the preposition should remain, I think. The poem gets a lot into those few lines, which works well for me…
Doug
> On Nov 14, 2018, at 3:41 AM, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> High Bill thanks will ponder -late this morning (here!) been bravely putting up curtain tracks for partner Janet
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> dreams memories business what's mine ?
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> On 13/11/2018 23:42, Bill Wootton wrote:
>> In dreams and memories
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>> people seem so preoccupied
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>> going about their business
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>> What’s mine?
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>> bw
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