Hi Patrick,
I feel dusty as most days.
Thanks,Jill
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Thanks Jill all that movement and settling !
P bit dusty myself
On 03/10/2018 05:38, Sheila Murphy wrote:
> Jill,
>
> The architectural delicacy of this piece honors its music. Thank
you for
> the very satisfying sense of landing in the repetition of end words
in
> lines two and three in the early stanzas of the poem.
>
> Magical and profound.
>
> Sheila
>
> On Tue, Oct 2, 2018 at 9:29 PM Jill Jones wrote:
>
>>
>> AS DUST SUNG
>>
>>
>>
>> as you fly over the ranges
>>
>> as you unroll under clouds
>>
>> as the crow ranges under the clouds
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>>
>>
>> as the kangaroo rearranges the grass
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>> as the rabbit rearranges dust
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>> as sounds of afternoon gather among dust
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>>
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>> as tree light moves
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>> as shadows fly across a wall
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>> as shades become ground
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>>
>>
>> as all arrangements settle and unsettle
>>
>> you, as you to the day’s dusk sound
>>
>> as doors, paths, sing song
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>>
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>> as you remember what you knew
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>> as you arrange grass fog at the door
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>> as you renew what’s to hand in the night
>>
>> (a snap from last week but I was on the move in the countryside
and
>> not much near computer or wifi)
>>
>>
>>
>>
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