Love this Jill. Agree with Patrick about that stunning first line. And I
like what you set up with veilings and clarities. A grieving poem?
Bill
On Wed, 22 Aug 2018 at 7:46 pm, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Hi Patrick,
> Thanks. And, yes, that is a thought for a story ...
> J
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> Thanks Jill great for me first line-could be the beginning of a story
> :)
> or several
>
> On 22/08/2018 08:52, Jill Jones wrote:
> >
> > Moon time and bee time are different
> >
> > and the same when your time is up
> >
> >
> >
> > it’s time for rain which is the veil
> >
> > and also the clarity through heat
> >
> > sharing the air with light
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> >
> > is this not an original art ever falling
> >
> > as though repeating what can’t be
> >
> > repeated drop by drop
> >
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