Your response much appreciated, Sheila.
The poem came from two separate pages of quick notes. So, yes, that
became something to connect up - the be in bee with the line breath,
also the ever rain (well, often more a hope than a reality in these
parts).
Best,Jill
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Subject:Jill - Wonderful Piece
Good morning, Jill. this is pure and strong The meanings of "bee"
resonate. The clear way through of rain, same I think of repeating
and
repeated.
One breath at a time.
Thank you. Sheila
Moon time and bee time are different
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> and the same when your time is up
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> it’s time for rain which is the veil
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> and also the clarity through heat
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> sharing the air with light
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> is this not an original art ever falling
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> as though repeating what can’t be
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> repeated drop by drop
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