Eek it outside my place now six horses in my cul de sac tricky
not sure about the last verse isn't the hand beckoning in?? for a final
trip?
On 11/04/2018 19:30, Sheila Murphy wrote:
> Doug, this is a strong image followed by a far-preferred suggestion that
> captures the focus. The better choice.
>
> Thank you! Sheila
>
> On Wed, Apr 11, 2018 at 10:50 AM, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
>> an ancient black carriage
>> its six white horses
>> or a modern stretch limousine
>>
>> a door opening
>> a beckoning hand
>>
>> just step aside into this alley
>> for another few years
>>
>> that’s the way to go
>>
>>
>> Douglas Barbour
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>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>
>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations
>> 2 (UofAPress).
>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>> Listen. If (UofAPress):
>>
>>
>> There is no real
>> world, my friends.
>> Why not, then
>> let the stars
>> shine in our bones?
>>
>> Robert Kroetsch
>>
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