Hi Sheila,
Your comments most gratefully received and appreciated. The breath
idea especially.
Best,
Jill
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Subject:Time Circles and Nectar
Jill, this is astonishing, moving, pure, and deeply real for me.
Every
breath of this poem builds toward a connected beauty. Thank you.
Sheila
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