That makes sense, Bill, but I like ‘feign’ too. I’m not exactly hostile to the ‘I’ her se but am I guess to its lazy use…
Doug
> On Mar 28, 2018, at 3:50 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> Thanks, Doug. I was thinking, in rewriting, of your hostility to the
> pependicular pronoun. I changed from feign to feint because I wanted to
> suggest the actual false movement.
>
> Bill
>
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