Thanks Sheila, Bill, Gerald, & Andrew (from this minus 30C place, the sky too clear). Andrew, I will think on it; as I wavered on whether or not it fit.
Doug
> On Jan 11, 2018, at 7:44 AM, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> Hey, Bill, 'in' is the only part I didn't like! It deflects the mood
> established. Just my MOR thought.
>
> Andrew
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> On 11 January 2018 at 13:04, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> Like particularly the moon hanging in there, Doug.
>>
>> Bill
>>
>> On Thu, 11 Jan 2018 at 3:02 pm, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> Such a welcome and clear moment, Doug. Uplifting and grounded at once.
>>> Thank you! Sheila
>>>
>>> On Wed, Jan 10, 2018 at 3:30 PM, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>>> the moon hangs low
>>>> beyond the barren trees
>>>>
>>>> ladder to the waxing
>>>> waning light
>>>>
>>>> ladder to the faraway
>>>> stars planets
>>>>
>>>> revolving far beyond
>>>> our tech yet
>>>>
>>>> the moon hangs (in) there
>>>> filling the mind awake
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Douglas Barbour
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>>>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>>>
>>>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations &
>> Continuations
>>>> 2 (UofAPress).
>>>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>>>> Listen. If (UofAPress):
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Swept snow, Li Po,
>>>> by dawn’s 40-watt moon
>>>> to the road that hies to office
>>>> away from home.
>>>>
>>>> Lorine Niedecker
>>>>
>>>
>>
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Douglas Barbour
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https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
Listen. If (UofAPress):
Swept snow, Li Po,
by dawn’s 40-watt moon
to the road that hies to office
away from home.
Lorine Niedecker
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