Thanks Andrew, Patrick. I’m experimenting with removing punctuation, Pat.
Gets in the way, esp question marks.
Bill
On Wed, 10 Jan 2018 at 8:58 pm, Patrick McManus <
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> bookstore grit comes away
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> thanks Bill rings a bell
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> do you need a question mark after cloud or is it not necessary
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> been cold here dark damp good for cold dark damp poetry!
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> On 09/01/2018 21:34, Bill Wootton wrote:
> > Closing a used copy
> >
> > Of Sam Shepard’s stories
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> > Gazing at the cover
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> > Photographed from behind
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> > A blue-hued father and his son sit
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> > Legs dangling over the end of a jetty
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> >
> > Two removed boots face the viewer
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> > Is that a bird
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> > Above a low cloud
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> >
> > Chip at it with my thumbnail
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> > Bookstore grit comes away
> >
> > Clear skies return
> >
> >
> > bw
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