Thanks Andrew.
At least the explanations do open the poem up.
I'm always trying - haha - but yes have been working a few new angles
recently.
Glad you liked,
Jill
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Subject:Re: Snap: Same Love Goes Harder
Yes, much more able to fully enjoy your Snap after the elucidations,
Jill!
You're always trying out new ways to say things, to bring them to
life for
the reader. Great, mate.
Andrew
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On 16 November 2017 at 04:45, Bill Wootton wrote:
> Thanks, Jill, for all that elucidation. Sorry to hear that you have
have
> such a horrible time of it. Withdrawal from out seems like a
potential
> title of a new poem. If I hear one more smarmy polly celebrating
the
> ‘robustness’ of the debate ‘we’ have all had ....
> As far as your current poem, I read it with new and more informed
eyes now.
> The Abbott family Christmas this year would be something to beyold
> Cheers,
> Bill
>
> On Thu, 16 Nov 2017 at 3:25 am, Sheila Murphy
> wrote:
>
> > Jill,
> >
> > The collage effects were interesting, and the embedded song, as
well. The
> > cause per se is powerful. Some language obstacles for me, based
upon
> > unfamiliarity with the resonances of particular words, titles,
etc.
> >
> > That said, I absorb the harmonic functioning of how your work can
go. You
> > touch upon a single instant and much more follows in feeling and
> > understanding.
> >
> > Always worth it for me, believe me!
> >
> > thanks, Sheila
> >
>
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