Thanks, Doug,
This is lovely in its turning and the syllabic opening out then
falling back - and great last line
Jill
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Subject:snap another small song
turn turn frostburn
red & yellow leaves yearn
toward their defeat
retreat repeat
slow the fall to
Douglas Barbour
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