So seemingly specific, Sheila (I mean I think I ‘know’ who), but actually can stand for so much or many more. And, yes, breaking those lines so sharply, brilliant as usual.
Doug
> On Oct 12, 2017, at 7:02 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> yes
> those line breaks
> break complacency
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> peggy lee's orchestration was by Randy Newman btw
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> (a student once asked me, in another context, do you know all this stuff,
> or did you read it in a book -- i read this on wikipedia just now)
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> On 12 October 2017 at 13:50, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> Sheila,
>>
>> Wow, those line breaks.
>>
>> Jill
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>> Jill Jones
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>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics"
>> To:
>> Cc:
>> Sent:Wed, 11 Oct 2017 20:59:12 -0700
>> Subject:Snap: Snap
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>> Here is what: *he struck *
>> and I took words
>> out of his
>> mouth and spat
>> them and him
>> out vowed
>> never
>> to be splintered
>> under the dark tent
>> of his un
>> readiness to serve
>> what he signed
>> up for
>>
>> Sheila E. Murphy
>>
>>
Douglas Barbour
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