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On Thu, 19 Oct 2017 at 7:30 pm, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> Support what you day here, Andrew. The turn would keep turning, not
> cliffhanger at all.
>
> Bill
>
> On Thu, 19 Oct 2017 at 5:39 pm, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
>> Great rhythmic dance. T'would be fine if it circled like a spinning wheel
>> -
>> it's impossible to print it as a moving wheel but it would be good to
>> imply
>> it by the typesetting.
>>
>> Andrew
>>
>> On 19 October 2017 at 14:17, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>
>> > Thanks, Doug,
>> >
>> > This is lovely in its turning and the syllabic opening out then
>> > falling back - and great last line
>> >
>> > Jill
>> > ________________________
>> > Jill Jones
>> > www.jilljones.com.au
>> >
>> > Latest book: Brink, Five Islands Press
>> > http://fiveislandspress.com/catalogue/brink-jill-jones
>> >
>> > ----- Original Message -----
>> > From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics"
>> > To:
>> > Cc:
>> > Sent:Wed, 18 Oct 2017 12:06:47 -0600
>> > Subject:snap another small song
>> >
>> > turn turn frostburn
>> > red & yellow leaves yearn
>> > toward their defeat
>> > retreat repeat
>> > slow the fall to
>> >
>> > Douglas Barbour
>> > [log in to unmask]
>> > https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>> >
>> > Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations &
>> > Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
>> > Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>> > Listen. If (UofAPress):
>> >
>> > There was the usual amount of corruption, intimidation, and rioting.
>> >
>> > Sir Charles Petrie
>> >
>> >
>>
>>
>> --
>> Andrew
>> http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
>> Books available through Walleah Press
>> http://walleahpress.com.au
>>
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