It maybe moves quickly through those short lines, Jill, but it slows the (this) reader down, to think (about).
And to think into how words do it.
Then as well as now, which I thought an import of the piece.
Doug
> On Sep 27, 2017, at 5:48 AM, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> Well, I am ill at the moment. It obviously knows.
>
> J
>
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> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics"
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> Cc:
> Sent:Wed, 27 Sep 2017 09:35:56 +0100
> Subject:Re: Snap: This Week's Pour
>
> hi Jill cheers from a selfstyled elderly poet
>
> spell check is trying to change Jill to ill!!!
>
> On 27/09/2017 09:13, Jill Jones wrote:
>> Hi Patrick,
>> Haha. But this refers to a real incident this week in Aus involving
> an exPM and a selfstyled anarchist DJ.
>>
>> J
>>
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>> On 27 Sep. 2017, 5:37 pm, at 5:37 pm, Patrick McManus wrote:
>>> Jill thanks funny thing when I was reading it thought (not you of
>>> course!)
>>>
>>> A Poet surrounds
>>> you with
>>> ridiculous thinking
>>> someone simply
>>> wants to punch you out
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On 27/09/2017 00:15, Jill Jones wrote:
>>>> This Week’s Pour
>>>>
>>>> The world pours
>>>> out over the
>>>> world which
>>>> pours out
>>>> further than
>>>>
>>>> As if a subscription
>>>> extended life
>>>> as levitation
>>>> or something obviously
>>>> visible
>>>>
>>>> As if we bring
>>>> the little we
>>>> shoulder as if
>>>> the sun sang on
>>>> something important
>>>>
>>>> A DJ surrounds
>>>> you with
>>>> ridiculous thinking
>>>> someone simply
>>>> wants to punch you out
>>>>
>>>> As if the ‘sudden’ is
>>>> the way life is
>>>> apparent, what grows
>>>> offspring
>>>> or exceptions
>>>>
>>>> A word prolongs
>>>> how it feels
>>>> and extends
>>>> same-same as a way
>>>> of working distinct
>>>>
>>>> Words, not as
>>>> rhymes but
>>>> unearthing
>>>> provenances
>>>> moving through gaps
>>>>
>>>> That is, imagine
>>>> refugees, storms, evidence
>>>> or all these relations
>>>> plucked as thought
>>>> via questions
>>>>
>>>>
>
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