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Date: Thu, 24 Aug 2017 10:10:06 +0100
From: Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>
To: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics <[log in to unmask]>
Thanks for looking fellow snappers !! just thought the title change to
Summer might avoid some confusion*
*
give a feeling of autumn approaching??was tempted to finish with
delights to follow cheers P
-sunny here today and I have shopped and almost got into second gear on
my bike!!!
*
*
*SUMMER*
outside
my
bedroom
window
the
grapes
are
just
turning
/pmcmanus/
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On 24/08/2017 04:11, Bill Wootton wrote:
> Ditto, Andrew, Patrick. The openness of 'turning' sounds fine to me.
>
> Bill
>
> On Thu, 24 Aug 2017 at 1:04 PM, Andrew Burke<[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
>> Well, I had no problem with 'turning' - knew what you meant straight away.
>> Maybe it's a geographic thing. We see a lot of grapevines around metro
>> areas in Australia ...
>>
>> Andrew
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>> On 24 August 2017 at 00:13, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]
>> wrote:
>>
>>> dear Barry Bill Doug I take your points but if you grow grapes there is
>>> only one turning and is that exciting time of the year that delicious
>>> treats are soon to be had
>>>
>>> he dribbles delightedly - I also liked the confusion of a turning
>> -perhaps
>>> being too clever by half !!!! perhaps mentioning August woild give a clue
>>>
>>> thanks again will show neighbours cat she what she thinks
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On 23/08/2017 16:51, Douglas Barbour wrote:
>>>
>>>> Interesting point, Barry, & I agree; the one word lines work here,
>>>> Patrick, but ‘turning’…what?
>>>>
>>>> Doug
>>>>
>>>>> On Aug 23, 2017, at 6:22 AM, Barry Alpert
>> <0000018ad5cfa345-dmarc-reques
>>>>> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>> Patrick,
>>>>>
>>>>> Very precise rendering, though I feel the need for one word describing
>>>>> the exact shade of colouration. When I sort out which bunch of grapes
>> to
>>>>> buy from the grocery, I know the indicators of overripe but rarely see
>>>>> "just/turning" in any context.
>>>>>
>>>>> Barry
>>>>>
>>>>> On Wed, 23 Aug 2017 11:00:31 +0100, Patrick McManus <
>>>>> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>> Bill thanks that first tinge very exciting -I liked trying the play
>>>>>> with 'turning' -and spinning out single word like the gradual process
>> of
>>>>>> ripening
>>>>>>
>>>>>> -looking forward to when they are ripe!P
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 23/08/2017 09:59, Bill Wootton wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Good on those turning grapes, Patrick. Like the one-word reveals too.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Bill
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On Wed, 23 Aug 2017 at 6:13 pm, Patrick McManus <
>>>>>>> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> *AUGUST 23^th *
>>>>>>>> outside
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> my
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> bedroom
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> window
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> the
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> grapes
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> are
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> just
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> turning
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> /pmcmanus/
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> /s194/
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Douglas Barbour
>>>> [log in to unmask]
>>>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>>>
>>>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations &
>> Continuations
>>>> 2 (UofAPress).
>>>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>>>> Listen. If (UofAPress):
>>>>
>>>> There was the usual amount of corruption, intimidation, and rioting.
>>>>
>>>> Sir Charles Petrie
>>>>
>> --
>> Andrew
>> http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
>> Books available through Walleah Press
>> http://walleahpress.com.au
>>
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