Yes, like the quick step.
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On 30 June 2017 at 00:03, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> liked the play dance of simple words combined cheers P
>
>
>
> On 29/06/2017 16:57, Douglas Barbour wrote:
>
>> Thanks Barry.
>>
>> I actually write these things with pen or pencil first, almost always,
>> still (& that always looks larger, more stretched out, than it does when
>> typed onto the screen). Title was last moment, but I think was just to
>> suggest that I do think about ‘lyric’ quite a bit, & this was one of those
>> that popped into my head, prompted by something, something...
>>
>> Doug
>>
>>> On Jun 29, 2017, at 9:53 AM, Barry Alpert <0000018ad5cfa345-dmarc-reques
>>> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>
>>> Doug, Intriguing title. Wish I knew how to transmit certain visual
>>> effects you get, but still limited in that area to pen on paper. Your fifth
>>> line the most striking unit in itself, while also syntactically connected
>>> to lines 4 and 6. A very rereadable snap. Barry On Thu, 29 Jun 2017
>>> 09:20:55 -0600, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>
>>> Thanks, you three.
>>>>
>>>> Doug
>>>>
>>>>> On Jun 29, 2017, at 4:06 AM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>> Like the surprising word dances here, Doug.
>>>>>
>>>>> Bill
>>>>>
>>>>> On Thu, 29 Jun 2017 at 4:00 am, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]
>>>>> >
>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>> Doug, this really hits the mark, and shapes together the now plus
>>>>>> retrospective places. Sheila
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On Wed, Jun 28, 2017 at 10:04 AM, Patrick McManus <
>>>>>> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> ah those lies! P
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On 28/06/2017 17:08, Douglas Barbour wrote:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Again a lyric lies
>>>>>>>> in wait what
>>>>>>>> can it hope to say
>>>>>>>> sing whose heart
>>>>>>>> break line dance
>>>>>>>> of old words anew
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Douglas Barbour
>>>>>>>> [log in to unmask]
>>>>>>>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations &
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Continuations
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> 2 (UofAPress).
>>>>>>>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>>>>>>>> Listen. If (UofAPress):
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> The palms rattle, the eucalypts
>>>>>>>> shed bark and blossom. Uninterpreted.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Denise Levertov
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> Douglas Barbour
>>>> [log in to unmask]
>>>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>>>
>>>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations &
>>>> Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
>>>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>>>> Listen. If (UofAPress):
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> The palms rattle, the eucalypts
>>>> shed bark and blossom. Uninterpreted.
>>>>
>>>> Denise Levertov
>>>>
>>> Douglas Barbour
>> [log in to unmask]
>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>
>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations
>> 2 (UofAPress).
>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>> Listen. If (UofAPress):
>>
>>
>> The palms rattle, the eucalypts
>> shed bark and blossom. Uninterpreted.
>>
>> Denise Levertov
>>
>
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