Thanks Doug. Hope to finish more cine-poems drafted during viewings of other films by this particular Romanian director, Corneliu Porumboiu, who was intriguing in person before having to fly to Cannes where this film was in competition.
Agree that last line was the most stimulating line generated by the acrostic. My punctuation and syntax did a fair amount of work attempting to make the preceding lines simulate progression towards the eighth.
Barry
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