Yes, it's shit Bill. I'll tighten it and fiddle with 'passed' and 'past'
... An unedited snap from my busy brain :-)
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On 22 June 2017 at 18:19, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Line one's 'passed' is odd to me, Andrew. And why the tercet among the
> couplets? Otherwise this is of interest, the idea of shapes' effect on
> lives.
>
> Bill
>
> On Thu, 22 Jun 2017 at 2:14 PM, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> > I drive passed
> > your past address
> >
> > a hollow among
> > bushes by the railway
> >
> > now you live
> > full time
> >
> > in the former
> > half-way house
> >
> > yet walk the city streets
> > like the homeless
> > you once lived among
> >
> > the pavement
> > alleys and buildings
> >
> > somehow shape
> > your life
> >
> >
> >
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