Oh, I like this version, Bill, really taut…
Doug
> On May 23, 2017, at 5:05 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> Thanks all. You're probably right about line 2, Doug. Could give me a title
> with slight rearrangement.
>
> through the mists
>
> a dirt yard
> chooks, white
> buk-arking peacably
>
> head at them
> on first legs
> see them spread
>
> buk-aaaaark
> closing in
> on a memory
>
> bw
> 24.5.17
>
> Bill
>
> On Wed, 24 May 2017 at 7:24 AM, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
>> Nice, Bill. Very vivid and welcome. Sheila
>>
>> On Tue, May 23, 2017 at 1:07 PM, Patrick McManus <
>> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>
>>> cheers early Bill mining those memories!
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On 23/05/2017 13:34, Bill Wootton wrote:
>>>
>>>> through the mists
>>>> as they say
>>>> a dirt yard
>>>> chooks, white
>>>> free ranging
>>>> buk-arking peacably
>>>>
>>>> head at them
>>>> on first legs
>>>> chooks spread
>>>> buk-aaaark
>>>> closing in
>>>> on a memory
>>>>
>>>> bw
>>>>
>>>
>>
Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
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already appalled by our language,
pointing at what they want.
Bill Manhire
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