Thanks, Patrick. Now the perils of rewriting. A third go at this snap
follows.
Cut 3
I cut myself today.
The empty green ghee tin looked useful.
Why not rinse it out?
Yikes. Surprised by sharp in sink suds.
Internal, infernal metal edge.
Warm water masked slash to right thumb.
Circum-grip withdrawn digit with left hand
to stem before it began, the rich red flow.
But rupture will not be denied.
Hackable husks over blood rivers,
we pump out opinions, pound about,
always only one breach from splatter.
bw
5.4.17
Bill
On Wed, 5 Apr 2017 at 5:16 PM, Patrick McManus <
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> Hi Bill thanks the perils of washing up and pouring out opinions -my
> shed is full of maybe useful jars and tins
>
>
> On 04/04/2017 23:37, Bill Wootton wrote:
> > I cut myself today
> > Surprised by sharp
> > in sink suds
> >
> > The green ghee tin
> > looked useful
> > Why not wash it out
> >
> > Warm water masked
> > the slash to right thumb
> > Infernal internal metal edge
> >
> > Quick withdrawal
> > Circumgrip with left hand
> > to stem before it began
> >
> > the rich red flow
> > But rupture will not
> > be denied its outflow
> >
> > All of us, pumping out
> > opinions, pounding about,
> > only so many blood rivers
> >
> > and sub-rivers,
> > one breach from
> > clearing out.
> >
> > bw
>
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